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- The gunman told John to drive to Wisconsin and then handcuffed dynamite to his arm. At that same time, a gunman in the parking garage found a note that the FBI believes was the "cheat sheet" for the kidnapper.The gunman told John to drive to Wisconsin and then handcuffed dynamite to his arm. At that same time, a gunman in the parking garage found a note that the FBI believes was the "cheat sheet" for the kidnapper. So a gunman kidnapped the guy and a second gunman showed up at a parking garage and found a cheat sheet?
- It reminded him of everything that he was going to order John to do, which suggested that he was not a professional. Opinion or fact? Unsubstantiated.
- John called his secretary and told her of the gunman's demands and it again showed that he was not a professional kidnapper because he asked that he wanted thousand dollar bills. Again, opinion or fact? Unsubstantiated.
- The kidnapping made national news and an FBI hotline was setup. set up.
This article makes little sense, and needs revisions/editing
- The gunman told John to drive to Wisconsin and then handcuffed dynamite to his arm. At that same time, a gunman in the parking garage found a note that the FBI believes was the "cheat sheet" for the kidnapper.The gunman told John to drive to Wisconsin and then handcuffed dynamite to his arm. At that same time, a gunman in the parking garage found a note that the FBI believes was the "cheat sheet" for the kidnapper. So a gunman kidnapped the guy and a second gunman showed up at a parking garage and found a cheat sheet? According to the actual episode the police/civilians found the cheat sheet in the garage after the crime took place.
- It reminded him of everything that he was going to order John to do, which suggested that he was not a professional. Opinion or fact? Unsubstantiated. According the the episode this is the opinion of criminal profiliers. Maybe unsubstantiated, but the opinion of people who spend their lives studying this stuff.
- John called his secretary and told her of the gunman's demands and it again showed that he was not a professional kidnapper because he asked that he wanted thousand dollar bills. Again, opinion or fact? Unsubstantiated. Again, according to the episode it's the opinion of criminal profilers. Not many people out there walking around with $1,000 bills.
- The kidnapping made national news and an FBI hotline was setup. set up. Km1022 (talk) 13:09, March 17, 2015 (UTC)